This is the first chapter of a three-part story I wrote last Thanksgiving.
Chapter
One
Dangerous
Territory
She
lurked on the sidelines, watching from behind a ready shield as the
hordes milled, their slavering growls bouncing off the thick log
walls. They gorged themselves with raw meat and spilled red in
sloshing puddles on the bowed plank floor. And she watched, waiting in
tense silence, afraid to speak, afraid to breathe.
For
many years she had lived in fear, and she had carried her shield. And she
had waited for the day when the chains would fall off and freedom
would reign.
She
shifted slightly, and her ankle chains grated against the brick wall.
Fear jolted through her like an electric pulse. She shuddered. The
barbarians halted in mid-shuffle and swung their ponderous heads
toward her, drool dripping from their slavering jaws. Their teeth,
instead of being stained a dark, horrible scratched brown, were
instead a sparkling white, gleaming and beautiful. Or they would have
been beautiful if not for their long, curved sharpness. She knew
those teeth would devour her if her chains rattled again. She
trembled.
They
stared unblinking, eyes a thunderous, ravaging red. Then, with
hulking shoulders rolling, they thundered into their weird dance
again. The steps she did not know. Nor was she likely to ever know.
Once she had wanted to know how to dance their dances.
But
that was before the chains.
Before
the beautiful, graceful and strong creatures transformed, slowly,
before her eyes, into horrendous creatures that she feared worse than
death itself.
She
silently cursed the chains.
If
not for the chains, she would be dancing with them. And instead of
the slavering growls and matted fur, they would have been white, pure
and shining, with strength to protect instead of tear down, and
instead of red eyes that sent terror winging through her, their eyes
would have been warm and kind, inviting her to join them. And she
would have. And danced as freely as a bird dancing in the sky.
Soaring
and swooping like the wild falcon.
She
leaned forward in her eagerness.
The
chains tightened around her ankles, unwilling to release their deadly
grip upon her. They controlled her, and fear rode her like one riding
a wild horse, forcing it into submission. A tear slid from her eye
and slipped down her cheek. She turned, and
tramped away into the night. As she slogged through the driving rain
and chilly mud, cold and miserable, she knew. She knew the chains, clanking around her ankles and restricting her step, would someday
overcome her.
Until
she could not walk at all. And then, how would she ever be free? How? How?
How?
What ARE they?! At first I thought they were people??
ReplyDeleteI actually don't know what they are! :o :D When I wrote the story, I just meant them to represent fear.
DeleteHow, Jessica, how!!???! I'm gonna go read the next chapter now....
ReplyDelete(This is great, by the way. )
How? HOWWW?! Haha ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :D