Friday, January 15, 2016

Can't Let You Go

When I knelt to gather
The pieces of my shattered heart
I found that some of them 
Were missing
Because you had taken them 
With you when you rode away.

You tugged on my heartstrings
But then ripped them out
Leaving me bleeding
And I hate that I can’t let you go.

My heart is a locked box
And I gave you the key
But you threw it away.

My heart is a rose, fragile
But you plucked all the petals
Leaving nothing but thorns
And I hate that I can’t let you go.

My heart is a diamond
That you could have set in a ring
But you threw it into the gutter
And I hate that I can’t let you go.

You stole my heart from me
Like the thief you are
And I want it back so bad.

I should hate you
But I can’t
You betrayed me
But now I betray myself.
 
This poem is written from the point of view of a character of mine. Another character, someone she really cares about, betrayed her and she sent him away, but she hates that she still cares despite the betrayal and she just can’t let him go even though she wants to more than anything.

5 comments:

  1. I'm glad that you clarafied this was about your characters; for a while there, I was thinking somewhere out there is a guy I need to teach a thing or two.*punches palm with fist*

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    1. Ah Jay, you're so awesome. XD That guy would so regret it. And I would do the same for you. *fist*

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    2. Jay, there wouldn't have been much left for you to deal with...

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    3. Jay, there wouldn't have been much left for you to deal with...

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